Tuesday, May 2, 2017

I Wonder who- DRAFT

Wonder who.


April 23rd 2017, Today I was coming home after camp, It was The Wood End Christen camp, I was so Excited to come home and see My Family, When we got in the Car Dad said “someone is at home waiting for you” , as He said that I started to wonder who.

We got Home and I saw no one at the door, I got Confused about who was waiting for me, When I got out of the car I got into the house and looked everywhere but no one was home I asked Dad again “Who is waiting” He said “Look at the lawn”

I Didn’t see anything until Dad moved my head and said “Look”

I looked and saw a Cage, A Bunny Cage. I ran over but didn’t see a bunny but instead I saw Chickens, Two Chickens, One with a tail and one without a tail, He said “ I can name one” so I did. I Named my Chicken Lucy the one with a tail.  Did you know that Chickens need their tails to fly, true fact.

The reason why He got the Chickens was because the Egg place that Dad and Ashley got there eggs from was moving to far away so we got our own Chickens for eggs”.
Three days passed and Jordan came home We Showed him the Chickens and he named His Colonel Sanders, Did you know that Colonel sanders is the Man on the KFC Logo I Found that funny but sad.

A week passed and Caleb came home Jordan showed him the Chickens and told him what he named his Chicken, He found the name funny it so we had Lucy and Colonel Sanders.

Colonel can be a funny thing but also annoying, Lucy was the Friendly chicken and can be funny. Colonel is the Annoying chicken because she is the picky one, This day was a awesome day because we added Two new pets to our Family and that is what happened in my Holidays.

9 comments:

  1. Hello Isabella,
    Awesome Recount, Jordan must really love the name Colonel Sanders. I see that you did add double spaces and one triple, be careful with those beasts. After all I loved your recount Isabella!

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    1. Thank You Sahana I'll fix that right way- Isabella

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  2. Kia Ora Isabella!
    What a recount!
    Colonel Sanders sounds awesome. Best chicken ever.
    Watch out for those proper nouns. Not ever word needs a capital.
    Great recount, anyway.
    -Greg.

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  3. Greg You Didn't spell Every in not every word but its all good -Isabella

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  4. I never knew that if chikens lose there tail they won't be able to fly, where did you go camping?

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  5. I Went to the Wood end Christen camp - Isabella

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  6. Isabella this is a great story about getting chickens. I enjoyed reading about the suspense that Dad created for you as you found out about them. Please re-read your story as you have capital letters in the wrong places.

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